I don't know if I can put the text into a readmore, so I'll just... leave this like this.....
Backstory:
Andrea Flowers is a 73-years-old widowed lady who lives
alone in an apartment in the big city.
She keeps pots of peace lilies, snake plants, aloe veras, and other
low-maintenance plants in her cozy apartment because the greenery comforts her,
it’s good for the environment, and they don’t die so easily. She goes through a routine of waking up at 6
AM, brushing her teeth, preparing and consuming tea and breakfast while
watching her favorite morning shows, watering her plants, taking a walk out to
the park, going grocery shopping, going home, napping, cleaning, watching her
favorite afternoon shows, eating dinner, writing, napping, showering, trying to
complete a jigsaw puzzle (which is 1/5ths done after several months of trying),
and sleeping at 8 PM. She has more or
less been following this routine ever since her retirement at age 65 from her
job at the pharmaceutical company.
Andrea likes to be prepared whenever she leaves the house;
she likes to carry at least a first-aid kit, a small baggy of grapes, a piece
of bread, keys, an old cell phone, a note pad and a pencil, a water bottle, a
glasses case, tissues, and a Swiss army knife in her purse. Due to her frail nature and the weight of her
purse, she takes frequent breaks while she’s out and about. She rarely ever turns around to return home
before she finishes her walk because she likes to stick to routine.
Her home life when she was child was peaceful, living with a
family of her parents, her brother, and her.
She looked up to her older brother Dyllan (who was older than her by
five years) and wanted to be tough and strong like him, so she often imitated
him as a child, by acting tough, up till her middle school years. It didn’t work so well because she was
physically weak and had low stamina. She
was a literary girl who still tried to act tough, but was putting up a front
emotionally by holding back her tears. Then
in high school, she went through a rebellious phase in her teenage years where
she rejected everything she was and tried to be a cool, edgy high school
student to try to fit in. Upon
graduating high school and entering college, Andrea realized that it was silly
to try to act a certain way to be accepted and spent the next few years finding
who she really was. She found out that
it was ok to cry and be weak. Her love
for botany and for the environment started in college and changed her major
from general education to horticulture.
She met her soon-to-be-husband Marko Flowers at the
pharmaceutical company in her late 20s and didn’t connect with him
immediately. She had just transferred to
his department in HR and found his behavior to be cold, so she kept her
interactions with him sparse. However,
as she got to know him through shared coffee breaks and conversing with each
other, she found that the both of them had many things in common. Then after dating for a couple years, they
got engaged and moved in together. They
lived happily together, more or less, until he died of sickness at age 64
(Andrea was 68 years old at the time).
Attributes:
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Environmentally conscious
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Optimistic
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Physically weak
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Considerate
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Caring
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Persistent
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Low endurance
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Boring (in conversation)
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Motivated
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Follows routine
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Prepared
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Tidy
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Tired
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Loving
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Panicky
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Clumsy
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Prone to failure
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Cries easily
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Slow
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Solitary
Toll Booth:
Andrea
hadn’t driven in years. She hadn’t driven
in years and knew that she shouldn’t be driving, due to her age, but she
figured she would drive to her brother’s house for once instead of having him
come to her, breaking routine. Even
though she was usually prepared, she found herself without money at an
automated tollbooth. She then tried to
find any change in the car and purse in a hurry. A car honked at her, so she started to panic
and started messing up the organization in the car. Some more cars started to honk a cacophonous
melody, which started making her cry and panic even more. Then, she looked through her wallet again and
found some cash. The rush and panic from
before made her disorganize her purse and wallet, obscuring the money she had
securely hid in her wallet. Andrea
calmed down and slipped what she had into the automated machine, raising its
bar to let her drive through.
Hey Tiffany! I know I said this last time, but I absolutely love how much detail you put into Andrea's backstory. It sounds like she's had a fulfilling (and relatable) life and it really builds on her character. I feel a little sorry for her widowed state, but she seems to be carrying on like a trooper. Her determined nature (in spite of her age) is really endearing :)
ReplyDeleteAnd that tollbooth exercise! It made me anxious for her and then laugh with relief when she finally found her money. It sounds like something I would do in a panic.
Backstory:
ReplyDeleteA lot of detail about her daily routine, but nothing about why or how it defines or impacts her emotionally or in regards to her personality. Quite a jump from her youth to her old age. You have developed much more about her very young years and I cannot help but wonder how she has developed, changed, and matured with life – how her life experiences have affected her - especially the death of her husband.
Attribute List:
Good.
Toll Booth:
You are faced with an interesting problem; she is a very prepared person who finds herself unprepared. This, to me, provides a great opportunity to develop in this story problem. I like the panic – but she cannot have the money to get through the tollbooth.